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Writing an Introduction

Proofreading Checklist

 

  Prewriting:  Outline Template

      
Essential Question:        _____________________________________________________________________

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PARAGRAPH 1
I.  Transition Topic Sentence #1:           _________________________________________________________
        A.        Reason #1:       _______________________________________________________________
                         1.         Example #1:     _________________________________________________________
                         2.         Example #2:     _________________________________________________________
        B.         Reason #2:       _______________________________________________________________
 
                       1.         Example #1:     _________________________________________________________
                        2.         Example #2:     _________________________________________________________
        C.        Reason #3:       _______________________________________________________________
                        1.         Example #1:     _________________________________________________________
                        2.         Example #2:     _________________________________________________________
PARAGRAPH 2
II.  Transition Topic Sentence #2:          _________________________________________________________
            A.        Reason #1:       _______________________________________________________________
                        1.         Example #1:     _________________________________________________________
                        2.         Example #2:     _________________________________________________________
            B.         Reason #2:       _______________________________________________________________
                        1.         Example #1:     _________________________________________________________
                        2.         Example #2:     _________________________________________________________
            C.        Reason #3:       _______________________________________________________________
                        1.         Example #1:     _________________________________________________________
                        2.         Example #2:     _________________________________________________________
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III.  Transition Topic Sentence #1:        _________________________________________________________
            A.        Reason #1:       _______________________________________________________________
                        1.         Example #1:     _________________________________________________________
                        2.         Example #2:     _________________________________________________________
            B.         Reason #2:       _______________________________________________________________
                        1.         Example #1:     _________________________________________________________
                        2.         Example #2:     _________________________________________________________
            C.        Reason #3:       _______________________________________________________________
                        1.         Example #1:     _________________________________________________________
                         2.         Example #2:     _________________________________________________________

Thesis Statement:          _____________________________________________________________________
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Writing an Introduction

A strong introduction should grab the reader’s attention, incite her/his interest and make the reader curious/care about what is to come.  In addition, it should provide the reader with a preview of the structure of the information in the essay (let the reader know what she/he can expect to encounter and when she/he will come across it in the writing).

                                       Step 1:  Broad Statement               

Begin with a broad statement about the world, people, life, etc.  (This statement may be a statement about your specific theme, topic, or work. However, it should be worded in a way that connects your paper to a “larger” issue or topic).  You may NOT use 1st or 2nd person pronouns (I, me, we, us, our, you, your, etc.), and you may NOT use a question!
 
                                             Step 2:  Works                                 

Introduce the works you are discussing.  Author, Title, dates, any other information (Remember to keep this sentence in line with your opening sentence.  This is not a technical sentence.  Needs transition)

                                              Step 3:  Topic                                   

General introduction of your subtopics/focus of your paper

                                             Step 4:  Thesis                                 

Your thesis statement is a statement, NOT a question!

 
                                                 Example

1.         Essential question:   In Of Mice and Men, who sacrifices himself?

                        Answer:  George

            Essential question #2:          How does George sacrifice himself?

                        Answer:          Friendship

                                                Employment

                                                Dream

            Thesis:                        George sacrifices himself by giving up employment, forgoing

                                                friendships and killing his dream.

            Paragraph:

            In life people sacrifice themselves for those they care about.  John Steinbeck’s novel, Of Mice and Men depicts the sacrifice of one of the main characters, George.  George, a migrant farm worker, has the burden of caring for his mentally retarded friend, Lennie.  Caring for Lennie leads George from one farm to the next.  Because he is forced to move about, George is unable to form relationships.  Ultimately, Lennie’s disability causes the twosome to lose their dream of a farm of their own.  Through out their relationship, George sacrifices himself by giving up employment, forgoing friendships and killing his dreams. 

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Proofreading Checklist

Author’s Name:         ___________________________________________
Peer’s Name:            ___________________________________________

Proofreading Checklist

Directions: 

Step 1:  Author:  Read your paper.  Record your thesis statement and transition topic     sentences.  Check and double check the following common errors included on the        checklist.  Make all necessary corrections and initial each blank under Author.  Finally, record the areas in which you will work while editing and revising your paper.  

Step 2:  Peer:  Read your peer’s paper.  Check the thesis statement and transition topic
sentences recorded below.  Check for mistakes, make corrections and initial under Peer.  Finally, record the areas in which the author will need to work while editing and revising his/her paper.

Thesis Statement:  ______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________

 
Transition Topic Sentence 1:  _________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________

Transition Topic Sentence 2:  _________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________

Transition Topic Sentence 3:  __________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
                                                                                                                Author           Peer            

1.         The author uses present verb tense                                      _____             _____

2.         The author effectively uses transitions                                  _____             _____

3.         The author uses complete sentences                                   _____           _____             
                        No run-ons (uses , and); no fragments
 
4.         The author uses correct punctuation                                     _____           _____             
                        Commas, periods, question marks

5.         The author uses correct spelling                                           _____           _____            

6.         The author uses pronouns correctly                                      _____           _____            

7.         The author uses proper subject-verb agreement                _____           _____            

8.         The author uses at least three (3) quotes                             _____             _____

9.         The author effectively integrates quotes into argument      _____             _____

10.       The author uses transition topic sentences (that relate      _____             _____
                        to the thesis

11.       The author uses specific pieces of evidence to support    _____             _____
                        all arguments

12.       The paragraphs are organized in the most effective and  _____             _____
                         logical order   

 Author:            I need to work on the following areas as I continue to edit and revise my paper:

            ___________________________________________________________________
             ___________________________________________________________________
             ___________________________________________________________________

Peer:               The author needs to work on the following areas as he/she continues to edit 

                         and revise his/her paper:
            ___________________________________________________________________
            ___________________________________________________________________
            ___________________________________________________________________

 

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